Wednesday 19 January 2011

Street Photograph VI in Twenty-One Syllables



Among frowns, hoods, umbrellas
I look for a sign of love
as rain almost connects us.

2 comments:

  1. Dear Sian, I keep reading this.
    Isn't it interesting how the word 'almost' - often acting as a weakening or diminishing agent - here, in your piece, becomes a keenly felt reaching out and creates a close magical space? Lovely.
    Sandy

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